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I just can't wait
To see all the things
You have on your plate

Mind spinning wild
Knowledge knows naught
I thought you abandoned
That fool of a thought

Smart in your own rite
You spin like a top
Like any child's toy
Don't know when to stop

Keep raging onward
And send me a card
I'll keep you posted
The State of the Yard

Blaze like a spark
Don't let them bind
You to a single thing
And cherish your mind

Hold to all vision
You can grasp close
Don't let them choke it
In some measured dose

Come by tomorrow
Or whenever you can
We will drink and ponder
That old practiced plan. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Xnoybis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Death in a Teacup

Contributed by Xnoybis on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:50:37 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Death in a teacup
I just can't wait
To see all the things
You have on your plate

Mind spinning wild
Knowledge knows naught
I thought you abandoned
That fool of a thought

Smart in your own rite
You spin like a top
Like any child's toy
Don't know when to stop

Keep raging onward
And send me a card
I'll keep you posted
The State of the Yard

Blaze like a spark
Don't let them bind
You to a single thing
And cherish your mind

Hold to all vision
You can grasp close
Don't let them choke it
In some measured dose

Come by tomorrow
Or whenever you can
We will drink and ponder
That old practiced plan.

Copyright © Xnoybis ... [ 2005-02-12 03:50:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death in a Teacup (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:39:52 AM AEST
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Deep and awesome write, excellently written verses and flowing in style.

Re: Death in a Teacup (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:16:21 PM AEST
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Interesting . . .

Re: Death in a Teacup (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
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Awesome. I love the conversational feeling. I get a great sense of the type of relationship going on here and I love it. You've packed so much into this and made it resound with friendship and old, long-lived companionship. I'm so glad you're able to write about it-- and so extremely well too. Refreshing
Bravo!

Lots of love and peace be with you.

Chelsea

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