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Of ever green places and empty faces
In the dark of the night I was tossing and turning
Dancing images in my memory returning
Years of dreams can't be wrong
As I pray for my heart to be strong
One hope after another
Each time going a little further
My heart still needs to know
Once the ice melts and it shows
That you hold the key to my heart
To unlock years of dormant love
I will never be complete until I find you
I'd forever be lost and feeling blue
On this journey I have set aloft
In my dreams visions of you cast so soft
Amongst fields of daffodils and asters
Journeying until we encounter.

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Until I Find You.....

Contributed by mina-1 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:31:32 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Life is full of remnant traces
Of ever green places and empty faces
In the dark of the night I was tossing and turning
Dancing images in my memory returning
Years of dreams can't be wrong
As I pray for my heart to be strong
One hope after another
Each time going a little further
My heart still needs to know
Once the ice melts and it shows
That you hold the key to my heart
To unlock years of dormant love
I will never be complete until I find you
I'd forever be lost and feeling blue
On this journey I have set aloft
In my dreams visions of you cast so soft
Amongst fields of daffodils and asters
Journeying until we encounter.

Until I Find You......

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-02-12 01:31:32]
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Re: Until I Find You..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:35:21 AM AEST
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Very well written poem. It was so sweet and I loved the flow. Great work. :-)

Re: Until I Find You..... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 05:30:32 AM AEST
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a master peice of poetry . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Until I Find You..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:47:27 AM AEST
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Excellent, capturing depth and feeling.

Re: Until I Find You..... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:58:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. "In my dreams visions of you cast so soft Amongst fields of daffodils and asters Journeying until we encounter" This left me with such a beautiful image in my mind. Much peace to you. Laura

Re: Until I Find You..... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:03:19 PM AEST
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well written it was amazing

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