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[title] => Valentines
[time] => 2005-02-11 20:29:37
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[bodytext] => I’ve written a list of ways to show
My love for you, so you would know.
And from this list I’ve picked the best,
The one I would use above the rest.
After careful decision, I believe in what I chose,
For I placed my heart in this lovely rose.
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[notes] => Authors note removed as requested in 'site help'. Five of six poems also removed. Please note, you must only include one poem in each submission. Thankyou. - Moderator_16
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Valentines
Contributed by
fielding88
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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I’ve written a list of ways to show
My love for you, so you would know.
And from this list I’ve picked the best,
The one I would use above the rest.
After careful decision, I believe in what I chose,
For I placed my heart in this lovely rose.
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Re: Valentines
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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| wow these are SO cool...i dont think u could ever give poetry to some1, id feel too self concious, but these are really cool...hope they make some1 happy =D |
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Re: Valentines
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:52:18 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful! Very sweet! I bet it made her fall head over heels in love with you :-) |
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Re: Valentines
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:56:47 AM AEST
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| these are lovely writes, I especially liked the last one, great job. |
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Re: Valentines
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:34:28 PM AEST
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These are all so great. The rhyming was perfect, your word choice just as much so. I just can't get over how well you've rhymed here. I don't think there's one slant rhyme in it and... wow. I applaud you and your Valentines. This is exquisitely done, extraordinarily well written.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Valentines
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by freckle on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:36:37 PM AEST
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| Absolutely wonderful! I liked the last one the best. What a lucky woman she is....great job! |
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Re: Valentines
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:34:11 PM AEST
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Wow Marc - this is terrific! How wonderfully you've expressed yourself! I'm quite impressed.
Knowing she will love this-
~SNM~ |
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Re: Valentines
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:56:05 PM AEST
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Well done! This piece sounds great, due to the excellent rhyming. You've also managed to escape cliché pitfalls rather nicely.
Very good expression, sounding not at all forced. Here's a full round of applause.
Andrew |
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Re: Valentines
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by breny on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 08:46:22 PM AEST
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it's funny how you just start writting and before you know it you have 3 times what you expected to have. i know the feeling.
like everyone has already said, these poems are great
and i love the emphasis that you put on something so small, by giving it so much meaning (the rose).
Great write! and sorry this is so long :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Valentines
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:48:59 PM AEST
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A love these, they're so gorgeous! I think my favourite one would have to be the third... but I can't say for sure, they're all brilliant.
Take care
- Becca |
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Re: Valentines
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:36:37 PM AEST
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aww,awesome write,my fav is the last 1,but they're all good,nothing i'd accept from a guy but i hope ur gf did,keep up the great job,loven it
savedbydeath |
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Re: Valentines
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 04:59:17 PM AEST
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wow
this is one of the most beautiful poem i have ever read.I am impress.lol you get 5 stars. |
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Re: Valentines
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:15:15 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful Marc! I think any girl to recieve this would cry of joy- I know I would. This was the most beauitful write you have ever created. I love it, very nicely done.
I hope all goes well for you two :)
--amanda-- |
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