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A broken life
Only a few could understand

Mary had an unspoken strife
An unspoken strife
Only a few could withstand

Mary lead a prison life
A prison life
...
She was raped by a man
...
She could'nt take it anymore
So I took his life
With my bare hands

I ended the hurt
In her core
I took his life
Because she could'nt
Take it...

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Anymore

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Mary had a broken life
A broken life
Only a few could understand

Mary had an unspoken strife
An unspoken strife
Only a few could withstand

Mary lead a prison life
A prison life
...
She was raped by a man
...
She could'nt take it anymore
So I took his life
With my bare hands

I ended the hurt
In her core
I took his life
Because she could'nt
Take it...

Anymore...

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-10 23:04:54]
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Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:10:37 PM AEST
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something is terribly brilliant in this poem, i think its the fact you wrote it, and the way you did it.

Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by _smelly_oranges_ on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:34:09 PM AEST
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this is pretty good
it deserves more comments

Orange (lol)

Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:50:05 AM AEST
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a very poignant poem,it shows the nature of the beast, within us all.
sojourner,

Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 02:45:03 AM AEST
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well done

Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:17:16 PM AEST
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Thanks for saving me clark
I love you
Love Always
Amber

Re: Anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:52:35 PM AEST
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This is very well written, very romantic in a sense. Wonderful write. Very beautiful.

--amanda--

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