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Cool air surrounds
Lake Huron as smooth as silk
Satin blue
Picking stones where a million billion lie
Thoughts turn to you
Times memories passing by
Happy times then lonly too
A thrown stone then ripples
Memories
Ripples fading over satin blue
Forgiveness to one I love
An orange firey ball
Anger
Brightness in the sky above
Rays across a sky satin blue
I toss a stone
A splash of anger
Then ripples fade away
Remembering love we shared
Seeing your smile and eyes of satin blue

Sinned
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Satin Blue

Contributed by sinned on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:56:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Nary a cloud in the sky
Cool air surrounds
Lake Huron as smooth as silk
Satin blue
Picking stones where a million billion lie
Thoughts turn to you
Times memories passing by
Happy times then lonly too
A thrown stone then ripples
Memories
Ripples fading over satin blue
Forgiveness to one I love
An orange firey ball
Anger
Brightness in the sky above
Rays across a sky satin blue
I toss a stone
A splash of anger
Then ripples fade away
Remembering love we shared
Seeing your smile and eyes of satin blue

Sinned

Copyright © sinned ... [ 2005-02-10 08:56:39]
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Re: Satin Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:34:54 AM AEST
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I love the way you pulled the color throughout the piece, and the way the morning walk is compared to the relationship. This is lovely.
Lonely and fiery are mispelled, but other than that there's not a thing wrong with this excellent piece.
Stitch

Re: Satin Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:38:10 AM AEST
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Very good. I agree with stitch..

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