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[aid] => mick
[title] => Skin deep
[time] => 2005-02-08 18:22:33
[hometext] => Wow, this is an intense write. But I want to address the reader and let them know that it is not meant to be negative, even though it may seem to be. These are the images that come to my mind, and I simply write it out.
[bodytext] => Skin deep, the nail digs deeper, just slightly, enough to scorch the pink unprotected skin that throbs, and swelches, melts even, while drowning in the thought's brigade. Stranded, brown molecules lose sight of their vision's insight. We all live to learn and, we all forget to remember, this trip down 6th grade science class where we first discovered our body's forsaken image, a frantic insult which defines our character. I forgot to remind you to remember, this unnecessary pleasure of forging our forefathers signatures, in God's name they have disgraced the forebearers ring. True, a falsity lies within these lines, intersecting humming bird's wives, with interplanetary wisdom anvils, that stripe the slate clean with brick's molding dust. Gather the strands of each and every individual's feathered hair linnens. Remember to clean the slate, clean the slate, clean the slate, with a stomach purged embrace, while strapped shoe butterfly wings tear the seams of your lip's zippered squack. Feel these words trample over your brain's muscular ability to comprehend. Feel the pulse, exageratingly vibrate within the veins in your skull. Do you feel like you will explode, into five million pieces of grey matter that spit clean the janitor's pale, strikingly fresh while you looked away expecting to see the five fingered leafs honestly posing for interviews with the black moon? One more fortnight and the darkness will envelope your fingertips trapping your fingernails within the cold madness while your eyes see trees in the distance brushing their leaves against the air, with your face, blank, expressing no recollection of the memory. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => zenmind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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