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[aid] => mick
[title] => Perfect World
[time] => 2005-02-07 23:24:31
[hometext] => Hello again, everyone. It's been a long time since I last posted a poem but I hope you enjoy the ones I'll be posting tonite. Enjoy!
[bodytext] => in an untouchable world of white & blue where the trees are bare and each brandch & twig is covered with a layer of glittering ice as if part of the world has been placed in an enourmous freezer but a not-yet frozen river flows quietly while reflections smile back at their real image snow thats been collecting high in the trees falls with a "thud" every once in awhile the snow has temporarily stopped falling from the sky the warth of the sun slowly melts away the blanket of snow like an ice cube left out to disappear the ball of shy light hides behind a cloud, waiting for winter to weaken (AUTHOR NOTE: I was assigned a picture in my Language Arts class and I was to write a poem about that picture. In the poem I had to include: personification, an alliterations, a metaphor, and a simile. It still needs some work but I thought it was pretty good for being written in the short about of time I had to write it. Thanks for reading!) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 27 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
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