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Array ( [sid] => 83343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ESCAPE [time] => 2005-02-07 07:39:31 [hometext] => my best friend wrote this one just before xmas wen i was feelin worse than ever. i find i can relate to it and wanted to share it with you. let me know what you think. [bodytext] => If I slice my wrist
and take the pain
i know that im
not insane

it feels so good
my worries go
in one clean hit
in one clean blow

the blood it bleeds
into the sink
i thought long and hard
i had to think

the cut is deep
i fall asleep
i hope i never wake

What ive done
it isnt wrong
i havent made a mistake

In my dream
i am so happy
i havent done anything bad

what ive done
is protect myself
so i never feel sad

I hear a noise
it sounds like crying

I hear someone shout,
Is he dying?

I open my eyes
I am alive

I really wish
I didnt survive
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 36 [informant] => thecutter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

ESCAPE

Contributed by thecutter on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If I slice my wrist
and take the pain
i know that im
not insane

it feels so good
my worries go
in one clean hit
in one clean blow

the blood it bleeds
into the sink
i thought long and hard
i had to think

the cut is deep
i fall asleep
i hope i never wake

What ive done
it isnt wrong
i havent made a mistake

In my dream
i am so happy
i havent done anything bad

what ive done
is protect myself
so i never feel sad

I hear a noise
it sounds like crying

I hear someone shout,
Is he dying?

I open my eyes
I am alive

I really wish
I didnt survive

Copyright © thecutter ... [ 2005-02-07 07:39:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ESCAPE (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:00:53 AM AEST
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Full on flowing with pain, vivid and clear words, full of deep meaning, excellent poem.

Re: ESCAPE (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:47:04 AM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful!! Terrrific. I can completley relate. If you wanna talk leave a message, tell your friend great write.

Re: ESCAPE (User Rating: 1 )
by unluckicharmz on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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wow i really like this i have poems like this but this thing wont let me post more than three a day! check out the ones i have already alright!!! thanks for the inspiration

Re: ESCAPE (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:46:52 PM AEST
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Don't you wish EVERYONE thought nothing of cutting...I hate having to hide my arms...thanks for sharing the poem..i love it

--Kara

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