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Array ( [sid] => 83307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I love you. [time] => 2005-02-07 00:07:39 [hometext] => this is one of my recently old ones, found it and decided to post it hope you all enjoy. please commint thanks. [bodytext] => I love you.

As she walked down the road
I could see here beauty untold
I need to have her with all of my heart
But a conversation with her I don’t know how to start
As she passed she missed a stride
And the only thing that was broken was her pride

All heads turned to gasp and glare
But from all around I was the only one there
She was so embarrassed she started to blush
I helped her up she started to cry I said hush
She was in a hurray and wanted to leave
But away from me she wouldn’t cleave
So I asked if she wanted some coffee or food
And to my surprise she said she would

Not soon after we were wed
And as I took her to my bed
I could some how tell there would be no others
And she gave us children, sisters and brothers
I thank the Lord with my all
That I was there to watch her fall.

“I love you.”
They kiss
“I love you too.”
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I love you.

Contributed by wolfman on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:07:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I love you.

As she walked down the road
I could see here beauty untold
I need to have her with all of my heart
But a conversation with her I don’t know how to start
As she passed she missed a stride
And the only thing that was broken was her pride

All heads turned to gasp and glare
But from all around I was the only one there
She was so embarrassed she started to blush
I helped her up she started to cry I said hush
She was in a hurray and wanted to leave
But away from me she wouldn’t cleave
So I asked if she wanted some coffee or food
And to my surprise she said she would

Not soon after we were wed
And as I took her to my bed
I could some how tell there would be no others
And she gave us children, sisters and brothers
I thank the Lord with my all
That I was there to watch her fall.

“I love you.”
They kiss
“I love you too.”




Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2005-02-07 00:07:39]
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Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:19:01 AM AEST
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A TRUE POET YOU ARE!MEANING THAT THE POEM WAS REALLY NEAT ALL THE WAY THRU!! SOUNDS LIKE YOU KICK BUTT IN LOVE-COOL!!!

DAN!!!!


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:44:12 AM AEST
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Ahhh..really beautiful.....loved it
Jenni


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tear-Drop-Kisses on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:22:41 AM AEST
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Ohh Ohh OHH!! I luff this poem...;.; I luff alot of poems..this one was a luff poem I luff lol ^^;; yesh yesh


Rika


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tear-Drop-Kisses on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:22:49 AM AEST
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Ohh Ohh OHH!! I luff this poem...;.; I luff alot of poems..this one was a luff poem I luff lol ^^;; yesh yesh


Rika


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tear-Drop-Kisses on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:23:10 AM AEST
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Ohh Ohh OHH!! I luff this poem...;.; I luff alot of poems..this one was a luff poem I luff lol ^^;; yesh yesh


Rika


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:51:30 PM AEST
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Coffee seems to be a major theme in this... poem.
Well done Josh. I truly loved the

"I thank the Lord with my all
That I was there to watch her fall"

Awesome Josh. I'm scribald with borad...
I mean..., I really liked it.
Take care.
David


Re: I love you. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:29:11 PM AEST
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I believe one of those big, long "awwwww"s is in order here? I liked, but the marriage-part happened too fast, I think. I mean, was the wedding at the coffee shop?

... not that that would be a bad idea, mind you. I'm just saying...

Andrew




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