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Heartless and cold
No way out

Trapped in my thoughts
Hurt and bleeding
Can't escape

Consumed by feelings
Fearing and lonely
Cornered in the dark

Time to end it for good
Find the way out
Escape
Get away from the dark corner

On the edge now
Ready to jump
Falling to my death
My body lying motionless

People rush to my side
It is too late
What's done is done
I am free...
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I am Free

Contributed by daydreamer22 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:46:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Lost inside my mind
Heartless and cold
No way out

Trapped in my thoughts
Hurt and bleeding
Can't escape

Consumed by feelings
Fearing and lonely
Cornered in the dark

Time to end it for good
Find the way out
Escape
Get away from the dark corner

On the edge now
Ready to jump
Falling to my death
My body lying motionless

People rush to my side
It is too late
What's done is done
I am free...

Copyright © daydreamer22 ... [ 2005-02-06 20:46:18]
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Re: I am Free (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:50:53 PM AEST
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I hope this isn't real...nothing is worth that...you have so much to offer....Good writting...Shari

Re: I am Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:04:41 PM AEST
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You make it seem so real with your words. Keep up the good writing I want to read more.

Re: I am Free (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:29:51 PM AEST
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well written...would like to read more...one question do you really think death would free you ?

Re: I am Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Accusurfer on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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I'm free too - from a different perspective. Interesting poem you have here.

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