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[sid] => 8323
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => But You Just Didn't
[time] => 2002-12-10 04:00:00
[hometext] => I honestly have no comment on this poem, but that I hope it doesn't bring tears to ne one's eyes.
[bodytext] => I looked at you and smiled the other day,
I thought you'd see me but you didn't. I said "I love you" and waited for what you'd say, I thought you'd hear me but you didn't. I asked you to come outside and play ball with me, I thought you'd follow me but you didn't. I drew a picture just for you to see, I thought you'd save it but you didn't. I made a fort for us back in the woods, I thought you'd camp with me, but you didn't. I found some worms n' such for fishing if we could, I thought you'd want to go but you didn't. I needed you just to talk to, my thoughts to share, I thought you'd want to but you didn't. I told you about the game, hoping you'd be there, I thought you'd surely come but you didn't. I asked you to share your youth with me, I thought you'd want to but you couldn't. My country called me to war, you asked me to come home safely, But I didn't. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Val [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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