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Array ( [sid] => 83210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something new for Tina [time] => 2005-02-06 10:33:42 [hometext] => Its been awhile since I actually wrote poetry...now I have someone in my life who has given me new [bodytext] => Hello Tina,
Happy Valentines day.
Here's a few words,
I wanted to say.

I know you've been hurt,
I know your in pain.
But try to remember,
It wasn't in vain.

If it wasn't for him,
We might never have met.
So think about that,
and never forget.

I've been waiting for you,
for over a year.
Now that your mine,
you'll never shed a tear.

I promise to you,
to do my best.
To show you our union,
has truly been blessed.

They say the good guys,
will win given time.
I guess that is true,
because you are finally mine.

I lie in bed at night,
with you on my mind.
Happy our lives,
are finally entwined.

So look to our future,
to the life that we'll share.
Your hand in mine,
we'll be happy I swear. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 2 [informant] => firestorm12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Something new for Tina

Contributed by firestorm12 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:33:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Hello Tina,
Happy Valentines day.
Here's a few words,
I wanted to say.

I know you've been hurt,
I know your in pain.
But try to remember,
It wasn't in vain.

If it wasn't for him,
We might never have met.
So think about that,
and never forget.

I've been waiting for you,
for over a year.
Now that your mine,
you'll never shed a tear.

I promise to you,
to do my best.
To show you our union,
has truly been blessed.

They say the good guys,
will win given time.
I guess that is true,
because you are finally mine.

I lie in bed at night,
with you on my mind.
Happy our lives,
are finally entwined.

So look to our future,
to the life that we'll share.
Your hand in mine,
we'll be happy I swear.

Copyright © firestorm12 ... [ 2005-02-06 10:33:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Something new for Tina (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:39:20 AM AEST
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That's wonderful that you are feeling so good. Aren't new relationships great. Everyday is exciting. I hope you have found your soulmate.

Re: Something new for Tina (User Rating: 1 )
by whispered_cries on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:01:47 AM AEST
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I like it it's very good, it just flows really well.

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