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Array ( [sid] => 83130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wrong [time] => 2005-02-05 17:24:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Is it wrong of me to do the things I do,
to pretend things are okay when they're not?

Was it wrong what happened to me,
or do you think that I deserved it?
Sometimes I don't know,
what I'm doing here.
Everything I've kept inside,
it all comes out in tears.

Is it wrong that I've pushed everyone away,
'cause I just can't handle it,
'cause I don't know how to deal,
'cause I don't know how to get over it.
Like an instant replay,
in my mind a recollection.
Not that you could've known,
I try to mask my imperfection.
Why is it so hard for me, why is everything so difficult?
I know I was a mistake.

Is it wrong that I can't deny that?

Is it wrong that people can be so cruel?
Or do you think that what he did was right?

Is it wrong that I think that he was right?

Or is it wrong of me to be so blind,
that I didn't see the hatred in his eyes,
when he said that he really cared?

Is it wrong of me to cling to the past,
and still hope my feelings of sorrow won't last?
I know that you are always there,
and that you really, truely care,

So is it wrong of me to try to go on with my life?

Is it wrong of me to think it's not right,
and that I should never be happy?
Sometimes I think I make myself sad,
it's hard to explain why I do it.
It's like I'm so used to being that way,
that when I'm not I feel like I'm betraying someone.

Is it wrong of me to do the things I do? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 32 [informant] => allforyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Wrong

Contributed by allforyou on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:24:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Is it wrong of me to do the things I do,
to pretend things are okay when they're not?

Was it wrong what happened to me,
or do you think that I deserved it?
Sometimes I don't know,
what I'm doing here.
Everything I've kept inside,
it all comes out in tears.

Is it wrong that I've pushed everyone away,
'cause I just can't handle it,
'cause I don't know how to deal,
'cause I don't know how to get over it.
Like an instant replay,
in my mind a recollection.
Not that you could've known,
I try to mask my imperfection.
Why is it so hard for me, why is everything so difficult?
I know I was a mistake.

Is it wrong that I can't deny that?

Is it wrong that people can be so cruel?
Or do you think that what he did was right?

Is it wrong that I think that he was right?

Or is it wrong of me to be so blind,
that I didn't see the hatred in his eyes,
when he said that he really cared?

Is it wrong of me to cling to the past,
and still hope my feelings of sorrow won't last?
I know that you are always there,
and that you really, truely care,

So is it wrong of me to try to go on with my life?

Is it wrong of me to think it's not right,
and that I should never be happy?
Sometimes I think I make myself sad,
it's hard to explain why I do it.
It's like I'm so used to being that way,
that when I'm not I feel like I'm betraying someone.

Is it wrong of me to do the things I do?

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2005-02-05 17:24:32]
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Re: Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by xMizeriex on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:50:42 PM AEST
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This is such a good poem. It invokes true feeling and I can really relate. I hope it made you feel better.

Take care,
Bx

Re: Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:13:03 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful write. It is very honest for one thing. I like that you show how you don't know all of the answers. It's easy to present ourselves in a way to others that says that we know what is going on and we have our sh*t together, but the fact is that sometimes we don't. It seems what you are talking about here is something very personal. It reminded me of rape. I don't know if that is what it is refering to, but whatever you were talking about, I am impressed with the amount of insight crept through this piece, almost unoticed. You might not have even noticed yourself, but what I've experienced, is that when I write about my problems, I usually learn something that I didn't previously know.

Is it wrong of me to think it's not right,
and that I should never be happy?
Sometimes I think I make myself sad,
it's hard to explain why I do it.
It's like I'm so used to being that way,
that when I'm not I feel like I'm betraying someone.

I think this was very insightful. It shows why you feel the way that you do, but it also shows your confusion......I dunno....this whole poem came across as very intimate and real. I like that, and I think it takes a lot of courage to write about such matters because of the pain it brings up.

Be True,
zenmind

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