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[aid] => mick
[title] => Repentiveness
[time] => 2005-02-05 14:04:22
[hometext] => well..here is what i got so far, im not quite finished with it though, about a murderer that has one day realized what he has done is wrong.
[bodytext] => A fish out of water, a person out of his bubble, a killer facing himself and realizing what he has done is wrong, but he cant take back what his done, its to late, his hurt the person that he didnt know, and has judged to quickly, there was a lock in his mind that nobody could open, he has pryied it open with a crow bar and finally heard the sirens singing their melodious songs ,he has seen the light, the light of a cigarette being lit in a cold night to keep warm, has sang the songs eaten crackers kneeled and prayed afraid of what will happen when he decays repented with harsh punishments so he cuts his wrists and sprays the wounds with lime and realizes he doesnt have much time their was a splinter in his mind as strange as seing an animal wearing clothes and finally comes to terms that he was an animal wearing clothes and thats the way the wistle blows when the ravaging dogs have smelled his scent which has made a dent in his good persona trying to escape a guilty cauntious can be remedied with a loss of reason a loss of reason cannoy be remedied with devastating events a suffering of excess anxiety a product of pollution of human society search for a prophet that is righwilled with piety living the remainder of his life with the outmost sobriety but where are all the prophets search party for the lost prophets cause none of them have a made a profit out of dying for faith a mesiah that has reached emphamy and stardom has accomplished his goal but the victims will not resurect like the trees that die in bleak december resurected by marches not so eternal mercy, and neither will he.... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Joel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
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