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Array ( [sid] => 82831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Choose Him [time] => 2005-02-03 16:53:03 [hometext] => please tell me what you think [bodytext] => Everyday at school
i find myself staring at you
i try to look away but i cant
and just to let you know im not obsesseve okay
i just find you cute
and nice
and smart
lets say your everything
but theres just one problem
while your everything
im nothing
you would never look at me
the way i look at you
the way i see it you only look at girls that are on the same level as you
like Megan, Rachel, Sarah, and that new girl to
you would never look at me
the way you look at them
but if you did
a miracle must have happend
but if a miracle would happen like that
then i would say that there must have been a big change
because boys always look at if you're pretty and skinny or ugly and fat
but there are the few
that dont care if you're skinny and pretty or ugly and fat
or even if your dumb or as witty as a cat
those like that are true men
better than you Brandon
you dont care if they're true to their word or not
as long as you can say they're hot
but a true man like Cameron
cares if they're true to their word
or has done a great sin
and he doesn't care if they are thin
and that's why compared to you
I choose him. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 30 [informant] => ArmyBrat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
I Choose Him

Contributed by ArmyBrat on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:53:03 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



Everyday at school
i find myself staring at you
i try to look away but i cant
and just to let you know im not obsesseve okay
i just find you cute
and nice
and smart
lets say your everything
but theres just one problem
while your everything
im nothing
you would never look at me
the way i look at you
the way i see it you only look at girls that are on the same level as you
like Megan, Rachel, Sarah, and that new girl to
you would never look at me
the way you look at them
but if you did
a miracle must have happend
but if a miracle would happen like that
then i would say that there must have been a big change
because boys always look at if you're pretty and skinny or ugly and fat
but there are the few
that dont care if you're skinny and pretty or ugly and fat
or even if your dumb or as witty as a cat
those like that are true men
better than you Brandon
you dont care if they're true to their word or not
as long as you can say they're hot
but a true man like Cameron
cares if they're true to their word
or has done a great sin
and he doesn't care if they are thin
and that's why compared to you
I choose him.




Copyright © ArmyBrat ... [ 2005-02-03 16:53:03]
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Re: I Choose Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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Nice Write, I can Somewhat realte but all and all Great Write ~!!!!!


Re: I Choose Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:48:40 PM AEST
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relate *** sorry I missed spelled it


Re: I Choose Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Sassy on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:43:57 AM AEST
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lynn, that was awsome!




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