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Array ( [sid] => 8272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST! [time] => 2002-12-08 23:20:00 [hometext] => little something my friends going through not me but please read it and rate it!the end don't ryme but it sounds okay i guess! [bodytext] => i slipped a razor across my wrist
didn't figure it would hurt
but now my life was taken
and i am now 6 feet under dirt!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my mom and dad sit down and cry
they miss me very much now!
they sometimes look at the sky
and say "when and how?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
they have no idea how i died
all they know is that i am gone
and sometimes they burst with tears
when they hear my favorite song!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my best friend sometimes says
that it gets rid of her pain
but messing around with razors
ain't no playin' game!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
but that's my story
and i hope you enjoyed
and just remember a razor went across my wrist
just because i got p***** [comments] => 2 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 36 [informant] => POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST!

Contributed by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i slipped a razor across my wrist
didn't figure it would hurt
but now my life was taken
and i am now 6 feet under dirt!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my mom and dad sit down and cry
they miss me very much now!
they sometimes look at the sky
and say "when and how?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
they have no idea how i died
all they know is that i am gone
and sometimes they burst with tears
when they hear my favorite song!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
my best friend sometimes says
that it gets rid of her pain
but messing around with razors
ain't no playin' game!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
but that's my story
and i hope you enjoyed
and just remember a razor went across my wrist
just because i got p*****

Copyright © POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG ... [ 2002-12-08 23:20:00]
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Re: RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST! (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 12:24:26 AM AEST
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Hey, lovebug I liked this poem and can relate to it in someway. Although I can tell you dont know what you are writing about (never gone through it yourself). I can tell you did because you care what your friend is going through. Hope yer friend can find his/herway out of his/her mess.

-Bobo (Joel)

Re: RAZOR ACROSS MY WRIST! (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:54:09 PM AEST
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i found this quite amusing, but i have to say i agree with joel and that you really can't know what you're writing about until you've been through it yourself. However, well done for trying to understand, i'm sure he/her appreciates it (if you showed them this poem). anyways, good write
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