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hath recommended itself unto me,
hath given me life anew.
The sky, which so hesitantly and painstakingly
hath opened itself to me,
hath opened mine eyes to all.
The Earth, which cautiously and secretly
hath hidden itslef from me,
hath saved me from greed.
The fire, which vividly and maniacally
hath blocked my path onward,
hath kept me from mine doom.
The water, which fruitfully and gracefully
hath given itself to me,
hath brought me mine survival.
The elements, which freely and abundantly
hath serenaded me in life,
hath given me sweet freedom. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Phantomdream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Life Anew, Sweet Freedom

Contributed by Phantomdream on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:37:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The air, which nimbly and sweetly
hath recommended itself unto me,
hath given me life anew.
The sky, which so hesitantly and painstakingly
hath opened itself to me,
hath opened mine eyes to all.
The Earth, which cautiously and secretly
hath hidden itslef from me,
hath saved me from greed.
The fire, which vividly and maniacally
hath blocked my path onward,
hath kept me from mine doom.
The water, which fruitfully and gracefully
hath given itself to me,
hath brought me mine survival.
The elements, which freely and abundantly
hath serenaded me in life,
hath given me sweet freedom.

Copyright © Phantomdream ... [ 2005-02-01 20:37:09]
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Re: Life Anew, Sweet Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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lovely, great imagery and I like the integration of Elizabethan era English in this poem.

Re: Life Anew, Sweet Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:09:58 AM AEST
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Great poem!
Lot of meaning and depth in those words.
I found it quite unique, and interesting.

Re: Life Anew, Sweet Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:46:18 PM AEST
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I recently finished reading a few works by Shakespeare, and I have a new appreciation for his work. Well written piece you have here.

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