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Array ( [sid] => 82508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll always care [time] => 2005-02-01 16:25:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You were in the office
Sitting in the chair,
You've already told me
Your turn on is hair.

You liked my friend
with much pain for me
I just want you smiling
I want to see you happy.

No matter if it kills me
I'll help you get who you want
I'll be the most painful teen
I can't give up, I just can't.

I have feelings for you
Which you will never know.
I hope these feelings will wash away
or atleast subside as I grow.

My feelings are the true things
I feel that it's love
Please come and save me
Before I'm sent to above.

You know my deepest secrets,
But how can I compair?
No matter what happens to us
I'll always care. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LoneCinderella13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I'll always care

Contributed by LoneCinderella13 on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:25:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You were in the office
Sitting in the chair,
You've already told me
Your turn on is hair.

You liked my friend
with much pain for me
I just want you smiling
I want to see you happy.

No matter if it kills me
I'll help you get who you want
I'll be the most painful teen
I can't give up, I just can't.

I have feelings for you
Which you will never know.
I hope these feelings will wash away
or atleast subside as I grow.

My feelings are the true things
I feel that it's love
Please come and save me
Before I'm sent to above.

You know my deepest secrets,
But how can I compair?
No matter what happens to us
I'll always care.

Copyright © LoneCinderella13 ... [ 2005-02-01 16:25:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'll always care (User Rating: 1 )
by Raven on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:00:08 PM AEST
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very good i really enjoyed reading it! believe me you dont want the feelings to fade as you grow though. at the very least your heart will become stronger. best wishes and again, great write!

Re: I'll always care (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:55:08 PM AEST
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Wow, I can relate so well !! This is a Great Poem !!! I really enjoyed reading it !! well, anyways all and all Great Write ~!!!!

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