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To throw away
In such a short notice
Today

Days are brightest
With you
Nights are darkest
For you

Nothing I can say
Nothing I can do
Why do you have
To go

Lies are deepest
With you
Truths are shallow
For you

Why do you feel
So Unknown
Being down
Even when your
Not alone

BECOUSE!
You dont know me!
I'm apart of my mind
I'm your third eye
You'r second thought
The part that hates
Even when you do not
Your Jeckle
And I'm Hyde
Or vise verse
We both cry
To bad
I'm the only one
That wants
To die....
Ha ha ha
We'll both die.... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 59 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Split Personality

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:23:37 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Such a beautiful thing
To throw away
In such a short notice
Today

Days are brightest
With you
Nights are darkest
For you

Nothing I can say
Nothing I can do
Why do you have
To go

Lies are deepest
With you
Truths are shallow
For you

Why do you feel
So Unknown
Being down
Even when your
Not alone

BECOUSE!
You dont know me!
I'm apart of my mind
I'm your third eye
You'r second thought
The part that hates
Even when you do not
Your Jeckle
And I'm Hyde
Or vise verse
We both cry
To bad
I'm the only one
That wants
To die....
Ha ha ha
We'll both die....

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-01 01:23:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:28:04 AM AEST
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Interesting write. I liked it. :-)

Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:35:17 AM AEST
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Very powerfull write!
U remind me of another writer on here but haven't heard from him in a long time 'cause he was very ill.
the reason it reminds me of him is cause of your humor.
His name is Robert Burns2. U might wonna check him out cause he's a very sucessfull writer.
I like the flows here and it's a very wise enlightening write.
thanks for the big ole smile.
hugs,
emy

Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:56:52 AM AEST
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I'm bi-polar..north and south..why can't we meet in the middle..LOL.. great write..although sad..

Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:20:23 AM AEST
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Very interesting...I liked it.

Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:42:13 AM AEST
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Interesting is right to discribe this write.
very well written.

Re: Split Personality (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:27:02 PM AEST
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loved it, loved it, and well i guess i loved it more than that. the only thing i didnt love was the fact you misspelled because and you're. shame, shame, lol =]

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