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Array ( [sid] => 82382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => True Love [time] => 2005-01-31 21:58:00 [hometext] => This poem was written on impulse... I'm not quite sure if I like it just yet... but thats ok [pssst i hate the ending] [bodytext] => You hear my painful cries
you see the fear in my eyes

Time is running out
there's nothing left to talk about

So lets say our goodbyes
before I am binded in these ties

The truth is I always loved you
time to confess, do you love me too?

It's too late...
I'm being dragged into fate!

I reach for you arm
for you can do me no harm

The truth was never spoken
but I took your warm touch as my token

I shall never know of your love
and my soul was set free as if a dove [comments] => 4 [counter] => 362 [topic] => 48 [informant] => HobGobby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

True Love

Contributed by HobGobby on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You hear my painful cries
you see the fear in my eyes

Time is running out
there's nothing left to talk about

So lets say our goodbyes
before I am binded in these ties

The truth is I always loved you
time to confess, do you love me too?

It's too late...
I'm being dragged into fate!

I reach for you arm
for you can do me no harm

The truth was never spoken
but I took your warm touch as my token

I shall never know of your love
and my soul was set free as if a dove

Copyright © HobGobby ... [ 2005-01-31 21:58:00]
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Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:09:21 PM AEST
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I liked it start to finish dove adds a nice flair Im not poetry expert so I dont critique anyones work thats not my place. Its always hard to lose someone we care about I hope things work out for ya, ( that is if this is a real life scene anyway) if not you captured heart break nicely
Michelle

Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by spazie on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:56:56 PM AEST
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WELL I LIKED IT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD CEPT I AGREE WITH YOU ABOUT THE ENEDING

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:19:52 AM AEST
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it's bound, not binded.

anyone can do you harm, whether you believe it or not. you should read my poem shine a little softer.

Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy1125 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:08:14 PM AEST
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i'm not the type of person 2 talk about in disagreement or suggest things that shud b changed in the original work of others..i can do nuthin but respect it...and since u're asking fa comments..i loved it...u cudn't have said it better..r wrote it betta....but da way u put it down on dis webpage....POWER-UP.
~
Breezy~

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