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Array ( [sid] => 82366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paradise found [time] => 2005-01-31 20:20:17 [hometext] => Wrote it in italy. can't wait to go back. [bodytext] => The sandy beach
the laping waves
on sparkling shores
of crystal sand

this is paradise finally found
this is paradise all around

The darkened skies
the stormy night
bright lightning clash
thunder and rain

this is paradise for wich we sought
this is paradise we've finallly caught

The windy days
on grassy plains
sway with the breeze
and rolling clouds

this is paradise dreamed to be
this is our paradise--you and me

The perfect night
the wind and rain
the snow and sun
the fire's flame

the embers lit for all to see
whispy shapes of what could be

on this night our love will gleam
like sundown on a diamond sea
to fullfill our lives, hopes and dreams

together, forever...you and me.

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Paradise found

Contributed by dream_protector_bp on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

The sandy beach
the laping waves
on sparkling shores
of crystal sand

this is paradise finally found
this is paradise all around

The darkened skies
the stormy night
bright lightning clash
thunder and rain

this is paradise for wich we sought
this is paradise we've finallly caught

The windy days
on grassy plains
sway with the breeze
and rolling clouds

this is paradise dreamed to be
this is our paradise--you and me

The perfect night
the wind and rain
the snow and sun
the fire's flame

the embers lit for all to see
whispy shapes of what could be

on this night our love will gleam
like sundown on a diamond sea
to fullfill our lives, hopes and dreams

together, forever...you and me.

Copyright © dream_protector_bp ... [ 2005-01-31 20:20:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Paradise found (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:45:31 PM AEST
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this is beautiful.... aside from a couple of spelling errors, it is very well written

Re: Paradise found (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:23:13 PM AEST
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a light airy beat with this and I liked the style Im not sure but I think they may have been typing boo boo's Iv done it all day but it didnt take away from the over all nature of this wonderful poem
Michelle

Re: Paradise found (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:30:13 PM AEST
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Great write! I liked this poem. TD

Re: Paradise found (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:50:59 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. I went to Italy last summer and it was absolutely gorgeous. You described everything so well. Nice work :-)

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