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Life
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is shorter than you think itll be gone before you know it
You only get one shot though, so dont mess up and blow it
While youre going around living life this way
Think what will happen on Judgment Day
Youll be real sorry then; youll try to fix your mistakes
But by that time, it will be way too late
You had many years to change your ways, so there is no excuse
For when you stand before God and face the truth
You cant lie your way out of this one, you cant run away
Are you going to be in Heaven or Hell everyday
Whatll it be? Its time to choose
Do you want to win or do you want to lose
Think about where youll be when your life is through
Just ask yourself now: What Would Jesus Do
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2005-01-30 21:36:50]
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Re: Life
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by vanilla_flame on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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that is really good, wow if this isnt one of your best, im gonna go check out your other works, :D
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Re: Life
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:46:42 PM AEST
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| reminds me a bit of eminem in a weird way. rather hits close to my research paper topic of the apocalypse. the question should be, what should be done. |
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Re: Life
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by bigtig6269 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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| thanks for your posts. I don't think I could ever be placed in Eminem's category, but it is a nice thought. Thanks again. |
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Re: Life
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:59:45 PM AEST
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| reminds me of eminem 2 lol, thats what i was thinking as i read it |
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