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Array ( [sid] => 82173 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Save me [time] => 2005-01-30 16:40:57 [hometext] => sing this in your head to the tune of the song 'the drugs dont work' by the verve, if you dont know the song it dosnt matter really xxxxxx [bodytext] => what was i doing an hour ago?
i cant remember that far,
probablprobably playing mind games,
blocking out the light, but starng at the stars,

i feel like im on a loosing streak,
my lucky dice have given up on me,
i feel like im the neighbourhood freak,
and my life is so empty,

only tears fill the hole in my soul,
im loosing my mind for no real reason at all,
my face is so blank and barron,
im sorry if i dont respond to your call,

my smile is just for defence,
instead of laughing with them,
im laughing at me at my own expense,

im falling to my knees,
but my knees arn't taking my weight,
im balancing on a cloud,
but soon the cloud will disipate,

it'll rain on me,
and when everyone is barely damp and wet,
il be soaked right through,
and like a neglected animal too,
each day il still come bounding up to you,

save me,
reach out and save me,
hold me tight,
dont release me as im still shaking with fright,
the whole wide world is out there,
i cant stand this anymore alone,
i cant take it on my chin,
i cant give out anymore pieces of my heart,
im already empty enough within,
save me,
please save me,
oh please save me---------. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => in2thetwilightzone2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Save me

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone2 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:40:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



what was i doing an hour ago?
i cant remember that far,
probablprobably playing mind games,
blocking out the light, but starng at the stars,

i feel like im on a loosing streak,
my lucky dice have given up on me,
i feel like im the neighbourhood freak,
and my life is so empty,

only tears fill the hole in my soul,
im loosing my mind for no real reason at all,
my face is so blank and barron,
im sorry if i dont respond to your call,

my smile is just for defence,
instead of laughing with them,
im laughing at me at my own expense,

im falling to my knees,
but my knees arn't taking my weight,
im balancing on a cloud,
but soon the cloud will disipate,

it'll rain on me,
and when everyone is barely damp and wet,
il be soaked right through,
and like a neglected animal too,
each day il still come bounding up to you,

save me,
reach out and save me,
hold me tight,
dont release me as im still shaking with fright,
the whole wide world is out there,
i cant stand this anymore alone,
i cant take it on my chin,
i cant give out anymore pieces of my heart,
im already empty enough within,
save me,
please save me,
oh please save me---------.




Copyright © in2thetwilightzone2 ... [ 2005-01-30 16:40:57]
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Re: Save me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:01:23 PM AEST
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Don't know if I eva heard that one or not but I'll try-n-find it.
Anyway this is the mos beautifull words I've eva heard.
It's an *** kickin masterpeice.
huggs, luv, mocho smiles,
emy
or maybe u could e-mail it to me.


Re: Save me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:24:31 PM AEST
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beautifully alive, very well written, hugs n' love nessa

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