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lost in a moment
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:15:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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lost in a moment
of love between you and i
and every time we share these moments
you and i both cry
the love we have shared in these moments
is truely amaizing
now every time i look upon you
my spirit keeps raising
you and i share those peacial moments
not of lust but of love
and every time we have these moments
we both rise above
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nightwolf
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2005-01-29 15:15:03]
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Re: lost in a moment
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by neglected1 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:17:18 PM AEST
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very sweet.. im glad you have so much life and love...
one suggestion- re-read your poem before posting.. so you can caught any errors..
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Re: lost in a moment
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by shelby on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:35:43 PM AEST
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nothing better in life than to have that special loved one near...... beautiful write
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Re: lost in a moment
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:29:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
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Re: lost in a moment
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by breny on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:36:18 PM AEST
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a short but very powerful write
i know this feeling very well! great job
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Re: lost in a moment
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:07:34 PM AEST
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This was a very very good poem. I loved reading it. I felt every emotion that i got out of it and I really liked it..
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