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Array ( [sid] => 81532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Meadow of Green [time] => 2005-01-26 02:50:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Waiting patiently in a meadow of green
Listening closely to the silent soft breeze
Hoping that my love will come to me soon
No longer the loser no longer the fool
I lay back and sing a song in my head
I will be patient no tears need be shed
Perhaps I was wrong a fool still am I
And this whole thing called love I must be blind
Surely she gave me signs of her trust
I could not have imagined there were no thoughts of lust
And then I recall what I saw in my head
My love, My Anny, lays under me dead
And I glance all around me, taking in a gasp
For I am at her grave site still living in my past
My love, my Anny, I am still waiting for you
My love, my Anny, what else could I do [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => poet_of_anger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Meadow of Green

Contributed by poet_of_anger on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 02:50:22 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Waiting patiently in a meadow of green
Listening closely to the silent soft breeze
Hoping that my love will come to me soon
No longer the loser no longer the fool
I lay back and sing a song in my head
I will be patient no tears need be shed
Perhaps I was wrong a fool still am I
And this whole thing called love I must be blind
Surely she gave me signs of her trust
I could not have imagined there were no thoughts of lust
And then I recall what I saw in my head
My love, My Anny, lays under me dead
And I glance all around me, taking in a gasp
For I am at her grave site still living in my past
My love, my Anny, I am still waiting for you
My love, my Anny, what else could I do

Copyright © poet_of_anger ... [ 2005-01-26 02:50:22]
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Re: Meadow of Green (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST
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wow .. thats pretty good .. !
keep writing !

Re: Meadow of Green (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 10:29:31 PM AEST
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Perfect title.. just wow..

Can you ever write!!!

I am blessed to have found your writes. Thank you for commenting on my write, so that I was able to locate you.

There are so many writers, I get lost. You are wonderful.

I sang the song, when I got to this sentence, I slowly recited.. no music , no singing..

****I could not have imagined there were no thoughts of lust

Deepened process, slowed down contact , I love it, this very effective closure... which brought tears to my eyes..

*****My love, my Anny, I am still waiting for you
My love, my Anny, what else could I do

Raquel Leah

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