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Array ( [sid] => 81258 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => forgive me [time] => 2005-01-24 13:28:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Forgive me I have come to plead
The inconsideration of my need
I can explain the reason why
If you could listen and please not cry
You see I felt deep in my heart
The love we shared had grown apart
What once was bright now seemed so dim
I felt no passion deep within
I could no longer quench your thirst
Sate the hunger you showed at first
Spark the flame to your desire
The magic gone our time expired
Then when I could take no more
The want that I could not ignore
Came and held me in its arms
Weakened me with all its charms
Told me all I longed to hear
Comforted me and held me near
Although I cried I went along
I did what I had known was wrong
But when it ended and I was through
The one I wanted was only you
You are the one my heart beats for
The only one that I adore
And now I come to beg to plead
That forgive my senseless need [comments] => 2 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 50 [informant] => bibi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
forgive me

Contributed by bibi on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Forgive me I have come to plead
The inconsideration of my need
I can explain the reason why
If you could listen and please not cry
You see I felt deep in my heart
The love we shared had grown apart
What once was bright now seemed so dim
I felt no passion deep within
I could no longer quench your thirst
Sate the hunger you showed at first
Spark the flame to your desire
The magic gone our time expired
Then when I could take no more
The want that I could not ignore
Came and held me in its arms
Weakened me with all its charms
Told me all I longed to hear
Comforted me and held me near
Although I cried I went along
I did what I had known was wrong
But when it ended and I was through
The one I wanted was only you
You are the one my heart beats for
The only one that I adore
And now I come to beg to plead
That forgive my senseless need




Copyright © bibi ... [ 2005-01-24 13:28:46]
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Re: forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:33:41 AM AEST
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Bravo!!!

I hope more people get to see this! It is well done!!


Re: forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:36:01 PM AEST
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WHOAAA BrA aVO dude this was charp
tough and amazing

Dude keep it up
UnKnOwN bUtTerFly




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