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Water-Fall
Contributed by
Crow
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:51:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Water-Fall
All around the waterfall
flowers, hues, beautiful colored arch.
Misted canopy paints it`s silver
motionless beauty lies in weep.
Ageless symptoms struck her down
a lover`s surrender had found her once.
Naked beauty washed in tears silent
upon the bed of stone.
See her wounds
have robbed her breath
ashes scattered before us.
Vivid colors a fragile thing
smallest creatures
mourn.
Here they bow
emerald carpet
eyes tell you
of her fate.
But one chance
is all she asked....
purity in love takes her.
Here at the Water-Fall
no one visits
a timeless beauty waits.
Canopies of silver
vivid colors
tears still flow
from the bed of stone
gently to the water`s edge...
One love had been allowed....Crow
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Crow
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2005-01-23 16:51:56]
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Re: Water-Fall
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST
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thanks for this its beautiful
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Re: Water-Fall
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by Crow on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:10:38 PM AEST
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a piece i thought was pretty, I`ll write a more personal one. I want too, Lane
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Re: Water-Fall
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:06:14 PM AEST
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this is very beautiful left me feeling very nice
I needed that today:)
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Re: Water-Fall
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by mom11159 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 08:30:18 PM AEST
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So filled with beautiful imagery to paint such a beautiful picture. your words captivating you have created a masterpiece here breathtaking in everyword I loved it
excellent job
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