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Array ( [sid] => 80675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing Everything [time] => 2005-01-20 02:30:18 [hometext] => This is all I ever write about, it's all I ever think about........comments are greatly appreciated, thanks :) [bodytext] => You're the best thing I've ever known,
it's gonna hurt to say goodbye.
Once you go I'm all alone,
left starring up at the sky.

The stars remind me of your face,
so beautiful, so bright.
It's not so bad here in this place,
but without you it just doesn't feel right.

My heart has ached since I got the news,
"My family is moving away."
I'm losing the one thing I didn't want to lose,
the girl I think about everyday.

Sometimes I wish I didn't care as much,
and feel the way that I do.
But since I do we better keep in touch,
cause I'm not completely losing you!
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CurtisC [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Losing Everything

Contributed by CurtisC on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:30:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You're the best thing I've ever known,
it's gonna hurt to say goodbye.
Once you go I'm all alone,
left starring up at the sky.

The stars remind me of your face,
so beautiful, so bright.
It's not so bad here in this place,
but without you it just doesn't feel right.

My heart has ached since I got the news,
"My family is moving away."
I'm losing the one thing I didn't want to lose,
the girl I think about everyday.

Sometimes I wish I didn't care as much,
and feel the way that I do.
But since I do we better keep in touch,
cause I'm not completely losing you!




Copyright © CurtisC ... [ 2005-01-20 02:30:18]
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Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:53:07 AM AEST
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A very beautiful poem..... Magnificant write!


Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by jace on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 12:03:32 PM AEST
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I feel ya
I know how it feels and I think you displayed
it well in your write very well writen
bravo


Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:17:11 PM AEST
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touching write once again. I hate the goodbyes thats the hardest part but the way this sounds I think you will stay in touch you wont lose her forever......
Hugs
Michelle


Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:38:58 PM AEST
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This is the sweetest poem I have read in forever. Awwww - hope she isn't too far away. Send her this if you haven't already - I bet she cries....
Thanks for sharing!
juliette


Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:53:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. That girl is lucky to have a guy that cares and loves her so much!


Re: Losing Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:59:40 PM AEST
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Aww Curtis, what a beautiful write. Once again good luck with this girl. TD




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