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Array ( [sid] => 80438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Angel [time] => 2005-01-18 17:43:44 [hometext] => Please tell if this is any good and if theres anything i could do to it to make it better [bodytext] => *Please do not steal this song or claim it as your own*

Here I am
Dying inside and out
The scars you make burn
As I cry your name out.
You and I were meant to be
So please just believe in me

You came like a train
hitting me fast and hard
leaving me broken and shattered
Im dying on the floor
but yet I still want to be with you

*Chorus*~
When you came and spoke to me
You lit the way
But then the light went,
and now I cant breathe
Save me

Everytime I see you
I wonder if you think about me.
As you pass by,
A light breaks through.
For some reason now,
I miss you

*Chorus*

Spread out your wings
take me away
Come and find me, save me
let me run away with you
Prove my theory on love wrong...
...Show me what love is about...

Come and save me

*Chorus*

fine me
take me
save me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 34 [informant] => xPureEcstacy_Ashx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
My Angel

Contributed by xPureEcstacy_Ashx on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:43:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



*Please do not steal this song or claim it as your own*

Here I am
Dying inside and out
The scars you make burn
As I cry your name out.
You and I were meant to be
So please just believe in me

You came like a train
hitting me fast and hard
leaving me broken and shattered
Im dying on the floor
but yet I still want to be with you

*Chorus*~
When you came and spoke to me
You lit the way
But then the light went,
and now I cant breathe
Save me

Everytime I see you
I wonder if you think about me.
As you pass by,
A light breaks through.
For some reason now,
I miss you

*Chorus*

Spread out your wings
take me away
Come and find me, save me
let me run away with you
Prove my theory on love wrong...
...Show me what love is about...

Come and save me

*Chorus*

fine me
take me
save me




Copyright © xPureEcstacy_Ashx ... [ 2005-01-18 17:43:44]
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Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:26:13 PM AEST
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i like this,it reminds me so much of how i feel all the time,again,length of the song is important,great job though

savedbydeath


Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:53:44 AM AEST
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Very good write. I really liked it.


Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ArkAngelGabriell on Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 05:40:35 PM AEST
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BRAVO




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