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Array ( [sid] => 80291 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm sory Janic [time] => 2005-01-17 16:14:52 [hometext] => My good friend and co-worker Janice was the FIRST to read my first poem AToast it wored her because her brother commited suicide so I wrote her an apology letter, but its been bothering me that I havent make a poem out of it so here it is enjoy. [bodytext] => I'm sorry Janice

To: Janice

"I am sorry that you had to read this without an explanation
No I was not writing my epitaph or my condemnation
For the fear and pain you may have felt
I apologize and wish those word would just melt
It read so true that it took you back
Made you remember the brother you now lack

I am sorry but these thoughts do haunt my mind
They are a part of me that I cant leave behind
My heart is heavy with these dark desires
I will only be rid of them when my life expires
On the outside it doesnt look so hard
But my soul and heart from this life are bared
I do not think that i will ever do this
I am sorry to cause you pain I did not wish

Take comfort in knowing
If I have trouble to friends I will be going
I am happy to know that you will be there
I am joyful in knowing that you care
Again I am sorry for the hurt my word did ensue
If I need help know that I will take comfort in you."

"Thank you for caring"
wipes his tears
"Joshua L. Dillon" [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 50 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
I'm sory Janic

Contributed by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I'm sorry Janice

To: Janice

"I am sorry that you had to read this without an explanation
No I was not writing my epitaph or my condemnation
For the fear and pain you may have felt
I apologize and wish those word would just melt
It read so true that it took you back
Made you remember the brother you now lack

I am sorry but these thoughts do haunt my mind
They are a part of me that I cant leave behind
My heart is heavy with these dark desires
I will only be rid of them when my life expires
On the outside it doesnt look so hard
But my soul and heart from this life are bared
I do not think that i will ever do this
I am sorry to cause you pain I did not wish

Take comfort in knowing
If I have trouble to friends I will be going
I am happy to know that you will be there
I am joyful in knowing that you care
Again I am sorry for the hurt my word did ensue
If I need help know that I will take comfort in you."

"Thank you for caring"
wipes his tears
"Joshua L. Dillon"




Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2005-01-17 16:14:52]
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Re: I'm sory Janic (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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beautifully written letter poem, heartfelt and sincere, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I'm sory Janic (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:39:04 PM AEST
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Well deserving of a 5 star vote thing.
Josh, this one was really good. I like where you're taking your poetry. And you thought you couldn't rhyme...
Take care.
David


Re: I'm sory Janic (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:54:00 PM AEST
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This is good, quite good. A good thing for her to hear, methinks. And your trademark ending style did its part wonderfully here.

Survive, old boy. I need someone good enough to plagiarize.

Andrew




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