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Array ( [sid] => 80282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Baby [time] => 2005-01-17 15:48:47 [hometext] => I wrote this poem in the spur of the moment. I was feeling sorry for myself a few weeks after my dog died. He died on 12/24 and is 1/17 today. I came home and nobody was there to greet me so i felt bad. Please tell me your feelings about it if you can. [bodytext] => You left me,
You aren't here.
When I need you,
You are nowhere near.

Leaning towards you,
And falling down.
I never thought this day would come,
When you would let me down.

When I wonder why,
You never answer.
Why I question your actions,
You never seem to care.

You left me,
At the worst time of my life.
To add to the depression,
You left me with lots of strife.

I feel it now,
The world seems to be closing in.
I need you here,
My walls are caving in.

The times i remember,
Never seem to help.
They only make me think,
Of the last time i heard you yelp.

I'll never see you again,
Until the day I die.
We'll meet each other,
In that big blue sky.

Till that day I say to you,
That I love you and I'll move on,
But I'll never forget you,
And I'll always sing you our song.

-I love you shaggy and you'll always be in my heart.
I'll never forget you and I know you'll never forget me.
I'll love you always and miss you forever. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 65 [informant] => XOashleyreneXO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
My Baby

Contributed by XOashleyreneXO on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:48:47 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



You left me,
You aren't here.
When I need you,
You are nowhere near.

Leaning towards you,
And falling down.
I never thought this day would come,
When you would let me down.

When I wonder why,
You never answer.
Why I question your actions,
You never seem to care.

You left me,
At the worst time of my life.
To add to the depression,
You left me with lots of strife.

I feel it now,
The world seems to be closing in.
I need you here,
My walls are caving in.

The times i remember,
Never seem to help.
They only make me think,
Of the last time i heard you yelp.

I'll never see you again,
Until the day I die.
We'll meet each other,
In that big blue sky.

Till that day I say to you,
That I love you and I'll move on,
But I'll never forget you,
And I'll always sing you our song.

-I love you shaggy and you'll always be in my heart.
I'll never forget you and I know you'll never forget me.
I'll love you always and miss you forever.




Copyright © XOashleyreneXO ... [ 2005-01-17 15:48:47]
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Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:16:24 PM AEST
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Sweet write.
I'm sorry for your loss.


Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:34:11 PM AEST
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awwwww that's so sad but cute!!!! i totally know how you feel. *tear*


Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:40:37 AM AEST
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I am sorry for your loss. Nice write.

Spazzo




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