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for something tragic
and dark
Im thirsting
for something liberating
and hopeful
Im craving
for something peaceful
and free
Im longing
for something final
an escape
Im so starving
for something exquiste
and tasteful
In this bland and
loveless world

is it the sweet taste of Death
i desire for?
oh yes..........grant me just one taste
hand me Death on a platter
and i would happily partake
of its rich and satisfying fruits
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Death on A Platter

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:05:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Im hungry
for something tragic
and dark
Im thirsting
for something liberating
and hopeful
Im craving
for something peaceful
and free
Im longing
for something final
an escape
Im so starving
for something exquiste
and tasteful
In this bland and
loveless world

is it the sweet taste of Death
i desire for?
oh yes..........grant me just one taste
hand me Death on a platter
and i would happily partake
of its rich and satisfying fruits
what a fine banquet it would make

Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-01-17 02:05:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death on A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:07:33 AM AEST
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Great write! I enjoyed it! I like how it all came together to make an awesome piece. Good job.

Re: Death on A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:08:11 AM AEST
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whoa..thats pretty dark, but i liked it. good job :)

Curtis

Re: Death on A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:16:14 AM AEST
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woa dark is right.i like this piece alot.

Re: Death on A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:50:01 PM AEST
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hhmmm, nice metaphor
or maybe I interpreted it wrong
oh well,
good job
Bye

Re: Death on A Platter (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 09:43:07 AM AEST
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I love it!
so dark and demented, just how i like them
Keep 'em comin'!!
Flamingblade

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