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Array ( [sid] => 79920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Play ME! [time] => 2005-01-14 19:59:36 [hometext] => something I wrote back in 2002 [bodytext] => I first saw him in front of his house
Who would’ve thought I’d meet him in my house
I bumped into him 3 times on the street
And all 3 times, made my heart skip a beat
He then asked me, if he could take me out
And that’s when I knew, it would happen without a doubt
But there’s been 3 strikes, so now he’s out
And of course now, there’s nothing but doubt
So what am I to do
Cuz I refuse to get blue
Wait, come to think of it
He's no one, he means ****
[comments] => 10 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 6 [informant] => o7neves [notes] => Edited due to the use of a banned word. Please do not try to fool the word filters. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Don't Play ME!

Contributed by o7neves on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I first saw him in front of his house
Who would’ve thought I’d meet him in my house
I bumped into him 3 times on the street
And all 3 times, made my heart skip a beat
He then asked me, if he could take me out
And that’s when I knew, it would happen without a doubt
But there’s been 3 strikes, so now he’s out
And of course now, there’s nothing but doubt
So what am I to do
Cuz I refuse to get blue
Wait, come to think of it
He's no one, he means ****

Copyright Â© o7neves ... [ 2005-01-14 19:59:36]
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Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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Wow what a twist....Keep writing....check out my two new ones...

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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good write keep it up

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:31:12 PM AEST
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=] most people mean the same thing...very good write.

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:45:23 PM AEST
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nice twist. love the ending. you tell em lol
great poem.
Arden

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:47:37 PM AEST
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great write and a nice lil twist at the end : )

~Bren~

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:10:17 AM AEST
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nice little ending you got there. Poetry can be a very wonderful way to vent some anger :)
good one.

Curtis

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:05:15 AM AEST
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lol...good write.

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 04:55:28 AM AEST
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Lmao that was good i like the twist you did in the end. It made the poem more interesting.

Good write,
Jane x

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:13:04 AM AEST
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i'm alittle confused AGAIN. lol

Re: Don't Play ME! (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:34:30 PM AEST
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great poem i love it
tractorbabe

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