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Array ( [sid] => 7981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Break me down [time] => 2002-12-05 05:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Break me down,
bare my soul,
take my body out of the cold,
hate me tenderly,
then leave me alone to lie,
in my own insanity,
Make me,
realize my thoughts,
are wrong,
make me see my faults,
my heart cries,
my heart longs,
hurt me softly,
and leave well enough alone,
forever doubting,
forever here,
by myself,
in my mind,
that I call home,
turning the words over in my head,
wanting to scream,
but no tears,
left,
Rip out my heart gently,
and break my soul carefully,
so that I remember the moment I fell,
the exact moment I realized I had no will left,
So the smile on your face as you crushed,
my dreams,
never leaves me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 6 [informant] => JamieLeAnne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Break me down

Contributed by JamieLeAnne on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Break me down,
bare my soul,
take my body out of the cold,
hate me tenderly,
then leave me alone to lie,
in my own insanity,
Make me,
realize my thoughts,
are wrong,
make me see my faults,
my heart cries,
my heart longs,
hurt me softly,
and leave well enough alone,
forever doubting,
forever here,
by myself,
in my mind,
that I call home,
turning the words over in my head,
wanting to scream,
but no tears,
left,
Rip out my heart gently,
and break my soul carefully,
so that I remember the moment I fell,
the exact moment I realized I had no will left,
So the smile on your face as you crushed,
my dreams,
never leaves me.

Copyright © JamieLeAnne ... [ 2002-12-05 05:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Break me down (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:29:23 AM AEST
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The very last lines of this poem are what got me, where it says so the smile on your face as you crushed my dreams, never leaves me....that's so sad....this is a good write...thanks for sharing this one....Keep em' coming...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Break me down (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonLite on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:38:10 PM AEST
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good job..i also like the ending.. i also like how tell the person to hurt you "gently" or "tenderly"

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