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The lights were dimmed low
Everything was blocked out
There was only you and me

Nothing else mattered except the everlasting moment
Of holding you in my arms
And kissing you like it was for the last time of my life

Laying down with you and cuddling close
Faintly hearing the tv muffled and distorted in the background
Everything was perfect and felt so right
Nothing could go wrong
No more thoughts of leaving eachother
All that mattered was that night
Just you and me, together.

The week of ultimate perfection
Of love, sickness, and intimacy
Of tears and soft spoken words
Of hearts breaking and love taken away
Was heavenly.
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The week of heaven

Contributed by brok3nxstar on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:48:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The week with dead silent nights
The lights were dimmed low
Everything was blocked out
There was only you and me

Nothing else mattered except the everlasting moment
Of holding you in my arms
And kissing you like it was for the last time of my life

Laying down with you and cuddling close
Faintly hearing the tv muffled and distorted in the background
Everything was perfect and felt so right
Nothing could go wrong
No more thoughts of leaving eachother
All that mattered was that night
Just you and me, together.

The week of ultimate perfection
Of love, sickness, and intimacy
Of tears and soft spoken words
Of hearts breaking and love taken away
Was heavenly.

Copyright © brok3nxstar ... [ 2005-01-13 19:48:39]
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Re: The week of heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 12:15:58 AM AEST
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It's good that you felt heaven for a whole week while most people don't even get to feel it for a day. Very nice poem!

-Butch

Re: The week of heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 12:16:01 AM AEST
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It's good that you felt heaven for a whole week while most people don't even get to feel it for a day. Very nice poem!

-Butch

Re: The week of heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:47:26 AM AEST
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i really like this poem you sound happy and sad...and lonely and together...thats hard to pull over really well and you did it very nicely

Re: The week of heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by brok3nxstar on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 02:08:13 PM AEST
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thanks guys.. i really appreciate the comments.. its hard having a long distance relationship and that was about the week we were together

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