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Array ( [sid] => 7957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Brighter Days [time] => 2002-12-04 21:40:00 [hometext] => Written For OREO, a friend I met on this site,who I feels needs a boost!
Thanks OreO! [bodytext] => I know you say your alone,
And you like it that way,
that all your relationships had flown,
and your left with today,
I wish I could help you,
make you happy once more,
helping just to get through,
like I'm sure you did before,
As a friend whom I just met,
I can clearly see,
That those pains you cant forget,
some things need to be set free,
An internet friend I met on this site,
Whos helped me in a lot of ways,
I only wish everything would be all right,
and for you brighter days,
It's ok to be alone in love,
but it's a little sad too,
theres a lot that your not sure of,
and just barely getting through,
In your forums,I can relate,
You've had a tough life passed,
I know you wish to close that gate,
and apply that hidden mask,
I'm here to tell you if you need a friend,
I will listen to what you want to say,
I maybe can help that heart to mend,
and give you brighter days! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 16 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Brighter Days

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I know you say your alone,
And you like it that way,
that all your relationships had flown,
and your left with today,
I wish I could help you,
make you happy once more,
helping just to get through,
like I'm sure you did before,
As a friend whom I just met,
I can clearly see,
That those pains you cant forget,
some things need to be set free,
An internet friend I met on this site,
Whos helped me in a lot of ways,
I only wish everything would be all right,
and for you brighter days,
It's ok to be alone in love,
but it's a little sad too,
theres a lot that your not sure of,
and just barely getting through,
In your forums,I can relate,
You've had a tough life passed,
I know you wish to close that gate,
and apply that hidden mask,
I'm here to tell you if you need a friend,
I will listen to what you want to say,
I maybe can help that heart to mend,
and give you brighter days!

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2002-12-04 21:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Brighter Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:44:56 PM AEST
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Christina, this is very sweet of you..I'm sure Oreo will appreciate this..she's a wonderful person...
Jenni

Re: Brighter Days (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:53:34 PM AEST
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Omg...i am crying so hard, you don't know how badly i needed to hear this today Christina...this touched me so deeply i can't even express how beautiful this is of you to do for me....You have a huge heart, and even with all you are going through you are willing to lend an ear for someone like me... that's amazing in my eyes, you truly are beautiful not only as a person but because of where your going in life with your love that you have for so many people. Thank you for making my day Christina i can never even tell you what this means to me...im printing it out and saving it forever.....Thank you my beautiful friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Brighter Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:03:03 PM AEST
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lovely dedication
to a sweet freind .

Re: Brighter Days (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:07:51 AM AEST
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My eyes are teary , that was so sweet and beautiful. Good friends are hard to come by.

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