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Array ( [sid] => 79533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => feeble heart [time] => 2005-01-12 00:37:02 [hometext] => hope you enjoy this one [bodytext] => Crumbled hopes and dreams
Tumble right before my eyes
Reach out your hand and save my soul
My heart is so feeble and
So easy to break
Lift away my fear
Tame all my hate
Tears flood my eyes
Like the deep blue ocean
Looking around me
My wounds are open
Help me supress these fears
Help me overcome this pain
Life without love
Is surely not the same
Then you came into my life and
Changed my ways
I'm lost for words to describe
What I have to say
Your arms are a safe haven for me
Embrace me in them and forever
protected I'll be
Hold me in your thoughts and
I'll hold you in my heart
From life's miseries my heart shall
depart
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feeble heart

Contributed by mina-1 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:37:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Crumbled hopes and dreams
Tumble right before my eyes
Reach out your hand and save my soul
My heart is so feeble and
So easy to break
Lift away my fear
Tame all my hate
Tears flood my eyes
Like the deep blue ocean
Looking around me
My wounds are open
Help me supress these fears
Help me overcome this pain
Life without love
Is surely not the same
Then you came into my life and
Changed my ways
I'm lost for words to describe
What I have to say
Your arms are a safe haven for me
Embrace me in them and forever
protected I'll be
Hold me in your thoughts and
I'll hold you in my heart
From life's miseries my heart shall
depart

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-01-12 00:37:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: feeble heart (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:08:12 AM AEST
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I really liked this one!! Especially towards the end. Keep it up. TD

Re: feeble heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:21:03 PM AEST
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such a depiction of innocence and longing, a crying out of ones soul, a very touching poem . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: feeble heart (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:42:42 PM AEST
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another great poem

Re: feeble heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:22:36 AM AEST
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Wow this is heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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