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I'm sorry if tears fell from you eyes
I'm sorry if I hurt you
That's not at all what I wanted to do

I'm sorry if I broke your heart
I'm sorry if you're torn apart
I'm sorry that you feel so sad
You're the best thing I ever had

I know that I made you cry
And I know you may be asking why
But for every tear that falls from your eye
Two more tears will fall from mine [comments] => 9 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 24 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Teardrop

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I'm sorry if I made you cry
I'm sorry if tears fell from you eyes
I'm sorry if I hurt you
That's not at all what I wanted to do

I'm sorry if I broke your heart
I'm sorry if you're torn apart
I'm sorry that you feel so sad
You're the best thing I ever had

I know that I made you cry
And I know you may be asking why
But for every tear that falls from your eye
Two more tears will fall from mine




Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-12-04 18:00:00]
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Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:09:53 PM AEST
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Awww Cloud, this is beautiful!!! A bit sad..but lovely..
Jenni


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:14:32 AM AEST
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This is so pretty, hope your friend see's your apology here ...stay strong..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:51:10 AM AEST
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wow...I can really relate to how you feel here. Very well done! Larry


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:29:31 PM AEST
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Candice this is lovely if very sad,
I'm sorry for you that you feel so sorry for what happened between you and whomever it's for.
But things always tend to happen for a reason in this life!
I gave up making newyears resolutions because they were always sat up to get broke! But maybe you're a stronger willed character than I? If so, then probably a good idea!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:36:37 PM AEST
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Dean, I don't feel sorry for ended that relationship, because I felt that it was going nowhere. I am deeply sorry because I know I broke his heart, and he's a very sweet man, but I just didn't feel the same way he did. I also know that if i didn't end that relationship we would both end up hurt even worse than we did.
I haven't made a new year's resolution in a long time because I didn't feel there was a need to but perhaps there is now?
ShadowsCloud


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:52:17 PM AEST
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Ahhh, so then yes I totally agree, you did the right thing there Candice, it is a shame when hearts are broken, but they do heal eventually.
And a pretty good reason to make one this year, and from what I read of you, you should be better at keeping them than I, so why not! Although I never tried making with anything to do with love, maybe I should also try?

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:58:05 PM AEST
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Dean, I know I did the right thing but I really hate hurting someone.because I know what it is like to be hurt. I am going to make this one this year, for two reasons. 1. I don't want to take the chance of getting hurt at this time of the year, and 2. I need more time. Perhaps you should try, this will be my first one that has to do with love. maybe that is what it takes to make it happen?
ShadowsCloud


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:07:27 PM AEST
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Maybe Candice,
We can but try!

With love
Dan:-)


Re: Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:10:29 PM AEST
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Yes Dean we can certainly try.
ShadowsCloud




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