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Array ( [sid] => 79366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mirror mirror... [time] => 2005-01-10 22:19:36 [hometext] => heh... finally decided to force myself to write something... hope you like it [bodytext] => Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

It shows yourself in your true light,
Are you pleased with this ugly sight?
You're nothing but disgusting,
Hateful, hurtful, so untrusting,
Busting with lusting and greed,
All you want is to get paid, all you want is to breed,
Need to be extinguished and then set a blaze,
Cause the devil can make one burst in flames with only his gaze...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

You're high and mighty but don't get that wrong,
Cause life is life and it doesn't last that long,
Your clock's running out, the sand falls fast,
Soon all the money and the lust will be in the past,
So hope you really like drinking from your golden grail,
Cause wine doesn't taste to sweet when you're burning in hell...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

So cast us down, throw us away,
We'll have our laugh another day,
Stray in reality, sway in the void,
Your life's consequences you can't avoid,
Annoyed our lord, his forgiveness you can't afford,
All your riches will only be ignored,
So look into the great mirror if you dare,
See what punishment your soul is to bare,
Care or not, look or not, your fate is the same,
But when the end comes, you only have yourself to blame...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Mirror mirror...

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

It shows yourself in your true light,
Are you pleased with this ugly sight?
You're nothing but disgusting,
Hateful, hurtful, so untrusting,
Busting with lusting and greed,
All you want is to get paid, all you want is to breed,
Need to be extinguished and then set a blaze,
Cause the devil can make one burst in flames with only his gaze...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

You're high and mighty but don't get that wrong,
Cause life is life and it doesn't last that long,
Your clock's running out, the sand falls fast,
Soon all the money and the lust will be in the past,
So hope you really like drinking from your golden grail,
Cause wine doesn't taste to sweet when you're burning in hell...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?

So cast us down, throw us away,
We'll have our laugh another day,
Stray in reality, sway in the void,
Your life's consequences you can't avoid,
Annoyed our lord, his forgiveness you can't afford,
All your riches will only be ignored,
So look into the great mirror if you dare,
See what punishment your soul is to bare,
Care or not, look or not, your fate is the same,
But when the end comes, you only have yourself to blame...

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Who's the wickedest of all?
Those who hate? Those who hurt?
Those who look at us like dirt?




Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2005-01-10 22:19:36]
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Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by LolitaMarionette on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:24:36 PM AEST
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Wonderful as usual James. I envy your creativity in writing so much. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the next.


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:57:27 PM AEST
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awesome as always cuddles!!! w00t great work


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by MorbidDeath on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:23:21 AM AEST
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I've read many of your others and this one keeps right up with them,
Awesome job

Caitlyn


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:16:13 AM AEST
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nicely written, good flow.

will certainly read the rest of your stuff


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:52:59 PM AEST
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I feel this way some times,
when you look into your mirror what do you see? I know I see the things I've done and wish I could change them,
People need to see them selfs how they truly are. The lose sight of things but I guess we all do. I just hope that people will change and not be so hateful and not be so judgmental. Nice write though! MMFCL

-Vicki-


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:56:35 PM AEST
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i have a hard enough time looking in a regular mirror, i dont think i can look in that one...if i broke it, how many years of bad luck would i get? brilliant poem. how stagnant of your writing skills, lol.


Re: Mirror mirror... (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:03:56 PM AEST
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Great job. You have a wonderful imagination. You are very creative and a great writer!




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