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[sid] => 78852
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Guilt
[time] => 2005-01-07 11:12:51
[hometext] => A poem I wrote when my best friend stabbed me in the back and I had thoughts of killing him. Enjoy. Comments appreciated
[bodytext] => Oh my god. What have I done? I killed my best friend. It's so very wrong.. As I stare down at him. He vomits blood. Starts choking. The horrer hits me. I can't stop looking. My eyes, scared, Can't tear away. How did our fight turn out this way? Reality hits me. He's gone Forever. No breathing, smiling, crying, Never. I did it. I took his life The guilt consumes me as I grab a knife. I make a deep cut, from elbow to wrist. The tears start falling I know we'll be missed. The blood starts flowing I sit and wait. I sigh sadly. How long does this take? This is taking to long. I get up and run. I search and search And find daddy's gun. I think with relief Soon i'll be dead I lift up the gun And place it at my head. I'm about to shoot. I stop and consider. My guilt erupts. I scream and pull the trigger. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Makeshift_2134 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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