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CHEAT
Contributed by
mia
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 02:45:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Do i see this coming?
Yeah........... You brought it on.
You cheated you fake
It can hurt like hell
It can sting like hell
Why would you do this without telling me?
Why did it have to come to this?
Our love
Our love was so great
Now marrage will never be a option
Never hurt another girls heart again & live in peace
No one ever deserves such a terrble thing
The pain can shoot from your heart to your very soul
The soul lives with my pain
The sould will suffer for all time.
Now.........the soul needs to move on
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mia
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2005-01-07 02:45:47]
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Re: CHEAT
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:45:47 AM AEST
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| hmmm, not sure, I can see where you're coming from as I myself have been there, but this is deffinetly a "had to be there" kind of poem, you know? Not that that's a bad thing, if anything it's good, it gives a real sense of belong that only those of us that have been there know. In short, I liked it, I liked it a lot. |
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