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Black wings,cascading over my head.
I look up at my angel, for he is here because I am almost dead.
An angel with black wings, and hair down to his shoulders black like the night sky, his pale white skin velvet and soft, the darkness surrounded his eyes, for they as well were black.
Piercings all over his body...showing his evil being....but yet he had blue eyes, and with these eyes there was a sense of innocence.
But from these eyes, you could indeed see the pain.
Bleeding tears stained to his face, because no one was ever there to wipe them away.
As I stepped closer to his fatal trance I was amazed by his beauty.
He stuck out his hand, and I placed mine in his he lifted me up.
WE staired at each other, he leaned in but I was hesitant., so he placed his hand on the back of my head, and pulled me in for his kiss of death.
And with the passion unfolding I wiped away his bleeding tears, and he took my last breath, as my lifeless body lie in his arms...

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Bleeding Tears

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:00:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




Black wings,cascading over my head.
I look up at my angel, for he is here because I am almost dead.
An angel with black wings, and hair down to his shoulders black like the night sky, his pale white skin velvet and soft, the darkness surrounded his eyes, for they as well were black.
Piercings all over his body...showing his evil being....but yet he had blue eyes, and with these eyes there was a sense of innocence.
But from these eyes, you could indeed see the pain.
Bleeding tears stained to his face, because no one was ever there to wipe them away.
As I stepped closer to his fatal trance I was amazed by his beauty.
He stuck out his hand, and I placed mine in his he lifted me up.
WE staired at each other, he leaned in but I was hesitant., so he placed his hand on the back of my head, and pulled me in for his kiss of death.
And with the passion unfolding I wiped away his bleeding tears, and he took my last breath, as my lifeless body lie in his arms...





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Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:06:09 AM AEST
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chillingly dark, great poem
pixie xx


Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:15:39 AM AEST
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very erie i liked this poem.. very different.. great write

peace and hope
JENNI


Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:30:15 AM AEST
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I agree with Pixie. It sent chills down my spine. But I totally loved it!


Re: Bleeding Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:41:36 AM AEST
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I felt the pain, no way out feeling.

Good write.




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