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Array ( [sid] => 78628 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternity [time] => 2005-01-05 19:20:55 [hometext] => I don't know, just had to let some thoughts out......All comments greatly appreciated [bodytext] => What a crazy life I choose to live in
What a crazy world I was born in
Where good things happen to the bad
And vice versa, that’s what is sad
Good deeds go un-rewarded
Only do we see the bad reported
Pain, chaos, destruction on this earth
Happiness, joy, good will since birth
Love, hate, two complex things
I don’t understand what either means
To love a person, I just don’t know
To hate a person seems easy to show
But what is hate? What is love?
Is there a Hell? Is there Heaven above?
To many questions, not enough time
The thought of death is lurking in my mind
A couple of pills, a rather sharp knife
These are the ways to end my life
What’s there to live for?
What’s there to die for?
Is anything so important I need to stay?
Is there someone to live for each day?
Thieves, murderers, rapists, and liars
Devils, demons, and Hell’s fires
No good exists, what have we done?
Too late to turn back, we’ve had our fun.
That’s it, it’s over, we’ve ruined it all
No one will catch you when you fall
Screams of pain, cries of terror
Take a good look in the mirror
Look at yourself, see what you’ve become
Pathetic, pitiful, piece of scum
I’ve seen myself, and I’ve seen the rest
Now to drive the dagger into my chest
No more chances, its over for you and me
Death and sorrow for all eternity.


1-5-05 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Kevin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Eternity

Contributed by Kevin on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:20:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



What a crazy life I choose to live in
What a crazy world I was born in
Where good things happen to the bad
And vice versa, that’s what is sad
Good deeds go un-rewarded
Only do we see the bad reported
Pain, chaos, destruction on this earth
Happiness, joy, good will since birth
Love, hate, two complex things
I don’t understand what either means
To love a person, I just don’t know
To hate a person seems easy to show
But what is hate? What is love?
Is there a Hell? Is there Heaven above?
To many questions, not enough time
The thought of death is lurking in my mind
A couple of pills, a rather sharp knife
These are the ways to end my life
What’s there to live for?
What’s there to die for?
Is anything so important I need to stay?
Is there someone to live for each day?
Thieves, murderers, rapists, and liars
Devils, demons, and Hell’s fires
No good exists, what have we done?
Too late to turn back, we’ve had our fun.
That’s it, it’s over, we’ve ruined it all
No one will catch you when you fall
Screams of pain, cries of terror
Take a good look in the mirror
Look at yourself, see what you’ve become
Pathetic, pitiful, piece of scum
I’ve seen myself, and I’ve seen the rest
Now to drive the dagger into my chest
No more chances, its over for you and me
Death and sorrow for all eternity.


1-5-05




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Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:25:23 PM AEST
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I loved this one...you can really feel the agony in it...beautiful.
~Kreamy


Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_soul08 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:31:18 PM AEST
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I love this poem! It seems as if it had just flowed out of you. I enjoyed your word choice and your opinions about the world's issues. You are very admirable.


Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:19:09 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I asolutly loved it. Its amazing. Great work.


Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:13:04 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly..but then I was already depressed and didn't need any help..I'll remember when I do where to come..thanx


Re: Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:28:00 PM AEST
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I love this poem. You have poured out all of your feelings, i can feel your pain. This is a truly great write! Keep it up.

Noone.




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