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[title] => Forever, You said..
[time] => 2002-12-02 18:00:00
[hometext] => Losing the one you love...
[bodytext] => Will you always be there, I asked you. You said you would, but now you're gone and I'm left here all alone. I have nothing left, nobody to talk to except for the voices in my head. My walls are closing in and there's nowhere to turn. What do you want me to do? I'm huddled on the floor in a ball and there's nothing you will do but sit and stare. You know exactly what's happening to me but you don't care. All you can do now is watch. You're watching me fail, and you're watching me as I lay helpless, alone, broken, and bleeding. I try to reach out my hand to you but you won't grab it...you just look at it as if it's cancer and it will contaminate you and bring you down. Well, maybe it is and maybe it will. I'm worthless, hopeless, and I don't deserve your hand or anybody else's....goodnight.
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Forever, You said..
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LayDownPlayDead
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Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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Will you always be there, I asked you. You said you would, but now you're gone and I'm left here all alone. I have nothing left, nobody to talk to except for the voices in my head. My walls are closing in and there's nowhere to turn. What do you want me to do? I'm huddled on the floor in a ball and there's nothing you will do but sit and stare. You know exactly what's happening to me but you don't care. All you can do now is watch. You're watching me fail, and you're watching me as I lay helpless, alone, broken, and bleeding. I try to reach out my hand to you but you won't grab it...you just look at it as if it's cancer and it will contaminate you and bring you down. Well, maybe it is and maybe it will. I'm worthless, hopeless, and I don't deserve your hand or anybody else's....goodnight.
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by OreO on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 07:00:34 PM AEST
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It's not that your worthless, hopeless, and don't deserve your hand or anyone else's.....it's the other person's "Fear"....fear destroys so many things in life these days....and people all to often let it ruin such wonderful things for them....remember beleive in yourself...know you are better than what other people's actions might make you think....and remember....so many things are misunderstood.....know your facts...Beautiful write, keep em' coming...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:07:38 PM AEST
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Sad but lovely write... Oreo is right...you have worth., believe in yourself...
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by fancyface4898 on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:36:46 PM AEST
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| as long as you believe you will get everything in life that you want. Nice write |
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:46:49 PM AEST
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| Autumn, do you remember me? Marc? Well, I decided to read your poems soon after our conversation. I'm assuming this poem was written about Justin? It is very sad. You do deserve someone's hand...but do they deserve yours? |
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:02:47 PM AEST
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| Get rid of the bum. You have great worth, you just need to find the one who is worthy of your love. Great heartwrenching write! Larry |
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by Blue on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:19:46 PM AEST
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This is beautiful...thank you for sharing.
I wish that I could say something comforting, but all I can say is that things do get better...
Blue |
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by PerfectlyDead666 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:31:07 PM AEST
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| i love this one too, great just like the others |
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Re: Forever, You said..
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:08:40 AM AEST
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| Very good but sad. Nice write though. |
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