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the third war has started
the sky looks like a blank white page
no color or hue
no shades of blue
its the dawning of a brand new age
tsunamis and earthquakes
in various places
the same sitiuation
just differnt faces
insest and rape
it all indicates the date
the seasons collide to one
cant tell the summer from the fall
last december there was layers of snow
this year theres barley any at all
its time for us to face
the worlds biggest fear
i hate to even say it
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the end of the world

Contributed by imalive_enoughsaid on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Our twins have fallen
the third war has started
the sky looks like a blank white page
no color or hue
no shades of blue
its the dawning of a brand new age
tsunamis and earthquakes
in various places
the same sitiuation
just differnt faces
insest and rape
it all indicates the date
the seasons collide to one
cant tell the summer from the fall
last december there was layers of snow
this year theres barley any at all
its time for us to face
the worlds biggest fear
i hate to even say it
but the end of the world is near

Copyright © imalive_enoughsaid ... [ 2005-01-03 15:08:54]
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Re: the end of the world (User Rating: 1 )
by rpnsk on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:35:00 PM AEST
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I like the flow of your piece, very nice.
But onto more pressing issues - I'm very accepting of people's views in whatever light - but you can't seriously think that these tsunamis and earthquakes were acts of god signifying the imminent destruction of the world.
Tsunamis, earthquakes, tornadoes - these are natural events that occur all the time.
Think about this - It is ignorance to think that if a man does something wrong it is the work of the devil - it is free choice not an outer force that affected his decision. There is certainly a lot of 'sin' in today's world but I cannot think of a time where there wasn't sin.
Im not going to debate the issue of whether the bible code is legitimate or not - I've read enough about that and I'm indifferent to that because I am not a mathematician or a scholar of Hebrew so I'm can't make or I'm not about to make an opinion based on other people's interpretations.
All I wanted to make clear is that controversial point about tsunamis/earthquakes being some part of a divine plan to annhiliate the earth.
However, I agree with your point of letting loved ones know you care as you should do all the time
Time will tell if the 'end of the world' is imminent.

Re: the end of the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:09:38 PM AEST
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there is an end to the world, its 2012. but its not exactly the end, just the end of this one. there will be another beginning. but global warming might intervene. any way its time for the end. and the third war? the war in 2012 is the third war, except it wont be countries against each other.

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