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The Long Goodbye
Contributed by
destinysseduction
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Silence so loud, ears covered muzzling
screams of what stopped in places
so long ago,
finding loss in the crying
din.
Bones rubbed the wrong way from cold
winds begging at the door,
the cushion of forgiveness worn away
forgetting where it used to
belong.
Speak long distance even up close, feign
a smile, reverberate pretense
marking its over-glossed
cadence.
Shelved greeting cards sit silent with
dusty words as ink-less pens
no longer write of
requited love.
Waning strength begs finale, faded glory
days whisper what is too late to
catch,
while last night's vespers answers
to moving
on.
destinysseduction (c)
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destinysseduction
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2005-01-02 15:15:24]
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Re: The Long Goodbye
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:19:40 PM AEST
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Nothing like an end of a relationship to bring out poetry..Good write..
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Re: The Long Goodbye
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:26:41 PM AEST
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| excellent write. the imagery is artful, the wording strong, and the flow is excellent. welcome to YPDC, hope to read more from you |
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Re: The Long Goodbye
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:19:20 PM AEST
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Wow...this piece is absolutely stunning...This is really an excellent write
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