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Array ( [sid] => 7812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cold Blood [time] => 2002-12-02 04:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Things don't seem right,
And I feel that emptiness again,
The once shallow cuts,
Have been reentered for the hundredth time,
The blood covers my walls,
And the screams go through the roof,
I harness the little humanity I have,
To make it a slow painless death,
My wrists drip ruby blood,
As I lie down in the cold bath water,
I breathe one final breath,
And then I leave this world,
The cries are never heard,
And the sirens seem to die,
As they take my cold body,
To the closest morgue.
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Cold Blood

Contributed by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Things don't seem right,
And I feel that emptiness again,
The once shallow cuts,
Have been reentered for the hundredth time,
The blood covers my walls,
And the screams go through the roof,
I harness the little humanity I have,
To make it a slow painless death,
My wrists drip ruby blood,
As I lie down in the cold bath water,
I breathe one final breath,
And then I leave this world,
The cries are never heard,
And the sirens seem to die,
As they take my cold body,
To the closest morgue.




Copyright © Dark_Angel_BabAy ... [ 2002-12-02 04:00:00]
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Re: Cold Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 04:04:51 AM AEST
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Things sure don't seem right in my world either..this is so sad and i've been here in this dark place so many times, one i'm having a hard time struggling with right now as a matter of a fact and it's hard....i hope your not thinking of doing anything harmful to yourself ...my heart goes out to you ..stay safe my friend..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Cold Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 04:09:30 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one...


Re: Cold Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Sumiko on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:31:25 AM AEST
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I have come to learn that the days that you wish you were dead, the days that you don't smile, the days you wish you never got out of bed, are actually the most beautiful days. If life didn't hurt and was not hard, there wouldn't ever be emotional poetry by bi-polar poets. Good write. I think you learned the same thing.




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