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Array ( [sid] => 7811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => You're Gone [time] => 2002-12-02 03:30:00 [hometext] => I think everyone feels this way one time or another, I just happened to write it down. [bodytext] => You’re Gone.

No words can be said,
And no one could ever feel,
That the love that I bled,
Was all so real.

Each little piece,
Of my loving heart,
Has faded away,
Part after part.

I can’t even look,
Or stare you in the eye,
It’s just like you took,
My life so I can die.

I thought it was great,
I guess I was wrong,
No one could relate,
My feelings were strong.

You act like I’m gone,
Like I was never there,
What we had wasn’t long,
But did you even care.

I look at it now,
And the tear in my eye,
Wishes I would have found,
What you said to be a lie.

But you were true,
And it’s hard to say,
I can’t believe we’re through,
In each and every way.

~Chris M. Blinn~
12.1.02 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 43 [informant] => tvs_catcher_5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You're Gone

Contributed by tvs_catcher_5 on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You’re Gone.

No words can be said,
And no one could ever feel,
That the love that I bled,
Was all so real.

Each little piece,
Of my loving heart,
Has faded away,
Part after part.

I can’t even look,
Or stare you in the eye,
It’s just like you took,
My life so I can die.

I thought it was great,
I guess I was wrong,
No one could relate,
My feelings were strong.

You act like I’m gone,
Like I was never there,
What we had wasn’t long,
But did you even care.

I look at it now,
And the tear in my eye,
Wishes I would have found,
What you said to be a lie.

But you were true,
And it’s hard to say,
I can’t believe we’re through,
In each and every way.

~Chris M. Blinn~
12.1.02

Copyright Â© tvs_catcher_5 ... [ 2002-12-02 03:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You're Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:50:21 AM AEST
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This is so sad...and yes i do beleive many people have felt this way before, i know i have...This is beautiful thanks for sharing it
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: You're Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:38:45 AM AEST
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another one that is great. just as the other one i read this too was to the point and words i relate. thank you for sharing.

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