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My life is full of shame
And mom and dad are the ones I blame
I can’t seem to escape this delusion
Life is just one big confusion
It was hard to know what it’s like living in the street
I felt so lonely and my demons I could not beat
I was left standing face-to-face with everything I fear
Because everything seemed so unclear
I was neglected and motherless
Maybe that’s why I feel so useless
I can’t change why I feel that way
I feel it everyday
I wish I could change my name
Maybe it would ease the pain
I tried to explain but you wouldn’t hear
Because you were never near
I wished upon shooting stars
When I had to live in cars
I would wish for everything to be alright
So I didn’t have to cry at night
But now I hide my feelings deep inside
Where there hard to find
I try not to let them show
Cause my innocent heart would begin to flow
And you would know just how you made me feel
Sometimes it gets hard to deal
I tried to be perfect
But it wasn’t worth it
Therapy didn’t work, and nothing seems to fill this void
All I feel is insecure, and overjoyed
I can never do anything right,
I guess that’s why I still cry myself to sleep at night
My dreams I can’t fine
And my faith in everything has fallen behind
Everything I touch it seems to fall apart
I wish I could restart
Start anew
And just maybe be able to please you
I have no pride left, there’s only shame
Because I’m the one that I have begun to blame
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Blame

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:00:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Blame

My life is full of shame
And mom and dad are the ones I blame
I can’t seem to escape this delusion
Life is just one big confusion
It was hard to know what it’s like living in the street
I felt so lonely and my demons I could not beat
I was left standing face-to-face with everything I fear
Because everything seemed so unclear
I was neglected and motherless
Maybe that’s why I feel so useless
I can’t change why I feel that way
I feel it everyday
I wish I could change my name
Maybe it would ease the pain
I tried to explain but you wouldn’t hear
Because you were never near
I wished upon shooting stars
When I had to live in cars
I would wish for everything to be alright
So I didn’t have to cry at night
But now I hide my feelings deep inside
Where there hard to find
I try not to let them show
Cause my innocent heart would begin to flow
And you would know just how you made me feel
Sometimes it gets hard to deal
I tried to be perfect
But it wasn’t worth it
Therapy didn’t work, and nothing seems to fill this void
All I feel is insecure, and overjoyed
I can never do anything right,
I guess that’s why I still cry myself to sleep at night
My dreams I can’t fine
And my faith in everything has fallen behind
Everything I touch it seems to fall apart
I wish I could restart
Start anew
And just maybe be able to please you
I have no pride left, there’s only shame
Because I’m the one that I have begun to blame




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Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:29:31 AM AEST
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Very sad but awesome writing.
I like the way u laid this one out and in the end u knew that it was time to take responsibility for your ownself.
It's a masterpeice 'cause we all play the blame game from time to time.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:46:19 AM AEST
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great write again im gunna read em all now but yea we all do the blamin crap keep it up


Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by mrj061390 on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:57:23 PM AEST
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wow!!! thats a great write!! Keep up the good work! can't wait to read some more of yours!

Luv ya
~Mishel Renee~


Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 12:03:50 PM AEST
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Others opinion of me is none of my business...say this a hundred times and then look in the mirror and say I Love You....you are unique and loved for sharing....you are here for a purpose....now get writing Bless You.




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