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[title] => (hollow ring)
[time] => 2004-12-30 22:12:10
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[bodytext] => (hollow ring) gunshots mirror teardrops (i can't stop) shooting (i can't stop) crying each step towards her matched with a bullet and a tear watching her face get smaller as i blow pieces of it away like the ashes of love like the ghosts of memories unreal it all seems and i can't stop myself from screaming "i love you" each time i pull the trigger her body finally falls and i empty the clip at her not really aiming sending pieces of stomach pieces of breast pieces of my past sailing across the living room in lonely, bloody arcs numb fingers drop the gun beside her, on my knees and in the final moments of conciousness my mind pulses, bursts snapshots that will never fade pictures of her in that bed pictures of her moaning face pictures of his tattooed smile and as the slideshow cycles through again and again my eyes fall to her bloodless hand my eyes fall on her fingers tears blur vision as i stare at that (hollow) ring the ring that looks just like mine the ring that means nothing now (hollow ring empty promises dead love goodbye) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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